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Friends At First

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Lips touching tentatively,
as friends meeting for the first time.

Eyes drowning in each other

locked, blinded from all else

Heads slightly slanted

breathing almost stopped

pulses pounding,

heartbeats quickened.

 

soft as rose petals

lips touch softly 

deepening in ardour

twisting tongues

turning in hunger

find each other 

devouring in a deepening hunger

pulling, twisting, sucking. 

 

Stars explode

behind tightly closed lids

as a universe disappears.

Pure passion creating

one lasting memory

a kiss to be recalled

on cold days

lasting through time

creating space of it's own

in minds and hearts. 

 

 

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  • poet2angels silver member
    July 11
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    Lovely imagery so vividly expressed...

    TY for entering!

    Lynda

  • I love it!
  • wow this is such an amazzing poem,
    you can almost feel his/her lips pressed against yours as you read this leaves the reader in awe,
    this is an amazing poem hun i really do love it,a
    all my love,
    kitty xxx