On a distant desert island, where the world would stay away.
And you and I could lead the life we choose.
In the perfect balmy weather and with all the day to play,
There is nothing we could ever do to lose.
I'd see you dancing naked to the music of the world.
In every way we wanted we'd make love.
We would live each day together every moment boyed and girled,
As we dreamt our lives beneath the stars above.
A little hut for loving, and a lean-to where we'd laugh,
Another simple shelter on the beach.
No need to hide our feelings when there isn't any staff
We would keep each other's bodies well in reach.
I would spend such time within you and I'd learn each way you rise
You would lead me down the paths that lead to bliss.
I would lick each inch with pleasure and go dancing in your eyes,
Then sleep each night locked to you with a kiss.
A contest entry
- Romantic Fantasy by ennovy.
700 points, ended July 8, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well see lane loved this you penned.
Another one that was brought forth as lies.
Ah well.
Well done on Hm should of been more.
Passions
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Brilliant.
This is a favorite.
Too many golden lines to quote.
This one I'll read over and over and I'm not even into rhyme.
Rhyme? This rhymes?
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Quite a write ...
good luck in the contest.
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treasured...this will be. I will take this on my walk now...inspiration
Love, Lane
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You paint the perfect picture of the perfect place, for the perfect life...ah...to have romantic fantasies and dreams...thanks for sharing this with us.
I wont ask about the practical things in life, like food and water, it will spoil the dream
Good write
Sue
xx
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sue...
...couldn't help but smile at the food and water comment
Love, lane
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