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Him

His passionate kisses
His loving touches
His warmth
His voice
Not my current man
I want my ex!

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Background by: Julia L. Clark
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4151113

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    I can relate to this. Sometimes no matter how much you love the person presently in your life, the thought of your past love still lingers on in your heart and mind. It's quite a challenge to get over and for some of us, it can be very frustrating. No matter how hard you try, you'll always have a hollow part in your heart. Well done and thanks for sharing this one here!




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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    your author notes does not have whats required to move to the finalist with the other contestants who complied with all rules. sorry good luck in future contest


  • Lonely Christina
    July 7, 2008
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    been here and felt this....loved this! good job and good luck hun
    xoxo- christina

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