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You Are [HM]

Candescent color,
full spectrum shines
from your heart-

My love you are poesy
with the audacity
to inspire...



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(I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin) ~ 18 Words ~

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  • penman gold member
    July 29, 2008
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    Excellent

    Another fabulous creation. So very well worded. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • nature
    July 27, 2008

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    True

    'My love you are poesy
    with the audacity
    to inspire...'
    what a beautiful say.... anything....
    A great close.
    congrats.

  • Michael P
    July 15, 2008

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    Ithica-my favorite one by far of the last four I have read-wow this is excellent-last verse was a rock-


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    i loved it hon i think yu did a very great fabolous job with your poem here this was a great pleasure reading good luck


  • Mallig gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Wow! This is so incredibly romantic, and perfectly balanced in brevity and beauty. And thanks for "poesy", I love learning new words!


  • PerVirtuous
    July 7, 2008
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    Nice entry! I likey. Have bunnies.


  • tomisb
    July 7, 2008

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    Oh we must be bold and crazy to to be inspirational? Or is it just that you like your men in technicolor with wings to lift you to heights never reached before. lol
    Love,
    Tom B.


    • Ithica silver member
      July 7, 2008
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      tomisb

      ALL OF THE ABOVE... Mr. Inspiration...

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