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The Guitar

The Guitar singing its simple
song, yet beautiful,

I await for something wonderful to happen
but yet the only change are the chords

In a list

A contest entry

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  • forsythia-rainbow
    May 2
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    Ooooooh I like this one. So simple, so cute.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 24

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    Short & sweet, yet lovely.
    A pleasure to read.

    Though the 2nd line I noticed a typo

    beuatiful --> "beautiful"

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • liduen silver member
    October 19, 2008

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    Awesome! Short and sweet, just how I like it.

    Congrats on the pretty gold shiney!

    (and yes, I am hyper)


  • Night Terrors
    August 8, 2008
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    very nice I love it


  • star girl
    July 23, 2008

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    oooh.You did a good job in a simple way.You know?
    It does kind of inspire
    and bring a point on really what a guitar is.
    Good Job! I luved it!


  • humblpye gold member
    July 8, 2008
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    Like a melody

    Wrote you a poem it's called "Harmony" you poem "Guitar" gave me the inspiration hope you like it!


  • SmartBrick
    July 7, 2008
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    This is pretty!

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