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[ Chains! ]

CHAINS!
Chained down unable to speak
CHAINS!
Unable to move
CHAINS!
Soon it will be too late
CHAINS!
The knife is at my throat
CHAINS!
All I hear is my own scream
CHAINS!
Then that is all, silence
CHAINS!
I don't see him anymore
CHAINS!
Where are they?
CHAINS!
Why don't I feel them?
CHAINS!
Is it really over?
CHAINS!
I am free.


Yes, you are free from the pain. I am sorry you had to struggle so much. You are safe in My arms now and nothing can hurt you here. You are a child of Mine and I will watch over you.

Author notes

So I have never written a poem in that style before but I thought it would be interesting to try out. That is what I think it would be like to be murdered. I know its extremely dark, especially compared to my last one but I just wanted to experiment. Comment back to let me know what you thought.

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