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Strawberry Delight

STRAWBERRY DELIGHT

 

My taste is so delicious,
can sweeten up your wine.
inviting on your lips,
creating thoughts divine.

I can taste real sensual,
or can taste very sweet.
Either way I affect you,
you are in for a treat.

My flavor so scrumptious,
your yen can't be denied.
Addicted to my sweetness,
your quench is satisfied.

Whip cream on shortcake,
ice cream, flavored jello.
Smooth glass of fine wine,
makes one very happy fello.

Much pleasure to be found,
brings us a smile or two.
Satisfy that sweet tooth,
strawberry delight for you.

Thoughts of temptation,
stirred by my flavor.
Delectable to taste buds,
relax, enjoy, just savor.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    I love the rhyming and I love the flowing, great stuff all round

    I may be round next time you have strawberries!!!

  • VeritasLiberte
    July 14, 2008

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    Berry Nice!

    You certainly have a way with words. This is one of my favorite fruits as it is. You've succeeded in making it even moreso! Berry Berry nice, dear Sandy!


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 13, 2008
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    Yes, and don't forget how delightful starwberries are on waffles in the morning. Excellent.


    • Sandygram
      July 13, 2008
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      A Sweet Sweet Comment

      Yummy Yummy!! You are so right. Strawberries in the morning, a great treat to start the day. . Thank you for stopping by and getting my tastebuds hungry for waffles and strawberries. Need to run to the waffle house now. You take care.

      Sandy


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 8, 2008

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    Mmmm ... I actually want a strawberry now, which is strange considering I really do not like strawberries
    Delicious poem!


    Best of luck hun
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


    • Sandygram
      July 11, 2008
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      Thank You Amanda. Warm Hugs and Big Smiles for you. Take care.


      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • PureCountry
    July 8, 2008

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    Now My Mouth

    is set for a cool bowl of ice cream to go with this Texas heat. You have penned such a wonderful, salivia rendering poem of this fruit, anyone would love.

    Well Done Mam.

    Richard

    • Sandygram
      July 8, 2008
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      Great Poem

      Thank You Richard for stopping by and reading. I so enjoy your comment. You take care and stay cool in that Texas heat.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • chiefmac
    July 7, 2008

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    For someone special to accept delicious delights, hidden smiles taken boldly, taken sweetly with satisfaction. Lovely rhyme and flow take the reader through a lovely kitchen of perfection that wins the heart and warms the soul. Love is an all year winner, but will work as the Summer Fruit.

    • Sandygram
      July 8, 2008
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      Love You Comment

      Hello Dan, Your comment made me smile. Something about a delicious strawberry that brings a smile and reminds me of sweet love. Always nice to hear from my friend. Take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • mcheadle
    July 7, 2008

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    My grandson loves strawberries

    dipped in cool whip. He thinks He is king when he gets this reward. The look of love in those eyes when he geet a treet from me. He said he ws going to run off to my house to live. Bless his heart...mac

    • Sandygram
      July 7, 2008
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      Sweet Sweet Comment

      Your comment made me smile. Well I can see why your grandson wants to live with you. You are one very special and caring grandpa. I always enjoy your comments. You have a Super Wonderful evening and know you are thought about.

      Bless You
      Sandy


  • Nature Song silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Very nice take on the prompt! Lovely little poem on Summer fruit! Good luck ~Sie


    • Sandygram
      July 8, 2008
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      Lovely Comment Sie

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care. Sandy

  • midnightblue1272
    July 7, 2008

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    Yummy!

    Great take on a old favorite flavor. See, you got me hungry now.

    • Sandygram
      July 8, 2008
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      Good Morning Dear Friend

      Hello Jaime, I hope you are well and are havingf a great day. Thank you for stopping by. Great to hear from you. You take care,

      Bless You,
      Sandy
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