When I see your eyes it brights up my hallway
We play games
Stay at each others houses
But what you dont know is that
Im in love with you
Your eyes, smile , hair, lips
We talk about what the other likes
I give you hints
you say someone else
And my mind is screaming
It's you, it's you
I tell you I like you
And you say just as a friend right
Cause I like your friend
And you say as a friend
Okay that scene is done with
You go runing home crying
Knocking everything in your way
Your eyes are puffy
He calls you
And ask if your okay
You snif and say yea
He comes by your house
And you forced a smile on your face
When really you
Wanna smack the cuteness outta of him
No what your 2 bf
Love each other
When you hate it
Author notes
This is a true story.IT actually happend to me so i was draw to it.
A contest entry
- Broken Angel by Maili Knephthan.
900 points, ended July 15, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Eh... this happended too me... a couple of days ago actually
Wasn't very pleasent in the slightest hehehe
Very heartfelt write, I had too laugh at
"And you forced a smile on your face
When really you
Wanna smack the cuteness outta of him"
hehehe love it ^^
Good luck with your entry
Claire x
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Lovely way you put it, though it sounds like a high school love. But keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your entry it was very beautiful indeed. I really like it and yes it mirrors my own story in many ways. Thank you for sharing and thank you for entering my contest
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