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The Other Woman

You haunt my dreams and bless my nightmares.
When I wake up my every though is still engraved with your name. 
My heart is smothered in a warm buzz that can only be caused by your voice.
My minded is raped by the never-ending thoughts of you.

I know you like me you let that show.
But of what kind of affection, I do not know.
Sometimes its like I’m the other woman in a secret love affair.
One minute you’re lying right beside me saying how much you care.
Then the next you’re passing me in the street, pretending I’m not there. 

No longer do I want to be apart of this game.
My heart cannot take any more of its pain.
It is bliss when your eyes and attention are on me.
But when your gone the pain is so blinding I can hardly see.

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  • lyrebird
    July 13, 2008

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    Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkay, Shannie Annie.

    "When I wake up my every though is still engraved with your name."
    You missed out the last "t" on the word "thought", but I love that line.



    Love you xxx