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Doors to the soul

If you looked into her eyes,
you could see straight through
to her soul.
Although now the view is blurred by tears.

In each tear,
Pain, hurt and sorrow
is trying to escape.

I used to be able to view her thoughts.
They used to be crystal clear to me.

I can no longer see into her,
I'm blocked out by tears.

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im not sure who is actually going to understand this.. but it makes perfect sense to me.

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  • breedluv gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Well, if it makes perfect sense to you....that's all that matters, isn't it? I hope you write poetry for your own enjoyment, not anyone elses. But I did enjoy reading it nonetheless.
    Russell


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 7, 2008
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    it makes perfect sense to me babe XX