He looks upon his fathers work
to cry tears of despair.
As he sees people have lost the will
to live and no-one seems to care.
The earth has fallen my father
it saddens my soul deep to see such
destruction and anger from the seas
the winds and the wroth of flames taking lives
young or old giving them no time to run.
He crys a flood of many tears
asking his father will these
atrocities throughout your world
ever find true peace.
A contest entry
- PHOTO PROMPT!!! WHAT DOES JESUS SEE???? by Talking Toni.
550 points, ended July 8, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Very creative take oh the picture. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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this is a butiful write maralisa
the background is awsome
xxx cheeky xxx
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this is lovely poem hun, im not very religion but this is a wonderfully penned poem, really makes us think.
yet society is just getting worse, and the more laws people put in the more people rebel and such,
it is a dying world, all my love,
kitty xxx -
Good Question.....
will we ever find true peace??? Only throgh CHrist Jesus will we ever find the true peace that he speaks of . This is a heartwrenching piece as we see the attrocties through the tear of Christ Jesus...Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~~ -
Wow, very good expression. A superb poem indeed. I really like the inner meaning of the poem. Its great. Keep it up my dear.
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Stunning work here. Very very profound and thought-provoking too. Such description and imagery of the way the world it now. You have written a very powerful piece indeed. WEll done for this. Good luck in the contest.
Dark
Wishes
Wayne Leon
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