Closed shut
I can see the sunlight
Hit my eye lids
Listening to music
With my head laid back
Falling asleep in the moving car
Going by overpasses
Passing through towns
And tall round power lines
Farther away from the city
The hills turn larger
The Ground getting more lush
Green;
The air smell finer
Freshness indeed
All that seems to be left
Are the mile markers under the car
Tall tree's behind guard rails
Wilderness; were in
And your dreams far from this place
You been trapped within
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nice!
I actually felt transported to a summer day with the windows down riding in the car. It reminded me of the last hour driving toward a favorite vacation spot of mine, driving through forests and through small towns. I really likes the first two lines with the sun. Reminds me of song lyrics that say "even a blind man knows when he is standing in the sun."
It was sad that the dream had to end as the speaker came back to "civilization".
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