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Forgiving humanity

I'l forgive them one more time,
But I warn you,
This is now that last,
This is my last bruise,
And this is my last tear,
17 years I've lived this life,
And as each year goes by,
Humanity gets worse and worse,
But why do I forgive them,
As they say two wrongs dont make a right,
I forgive them cause I must,
Its who I am,
And who im meant to be,
This may be the last draw,
But I know theyl do it again,
And no doubt,
Il be writing this poem again,
For evil is always there,
No matter how much I work,
I can never destroy it all,
Never save the human kind,
For what are they without it,
Boy I would love to see,
So I end this poem,
Making a solemn vow,
That this tear is the last,
This bruise is the last,
This poem is the last,
Fuck,
Who am I kidding?

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  • PersephoneInWinter
    July 21, 2008

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    thanks for adding me as a favorite. and now i will return the favor.
    i think that we have a lot in common, especially when i read this poem. society sucks and humanity is just cruel. people like us are sensitive, and we channel the pain of others through our writing and other ways. i think that this poem is very raw and very true. i look forward to reading more of your work


  • burdened
    July 10, 2008

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    Hey this is a really good piece, but no, it wont be your last poem.. *hugs* Beautifully written hun
    Xx