There she is
Alone, looking to the sky
An angelic figurine; a dime
No one around, just the sound of wind
The prairie is peaceful
Sun blazing down on the grass
Protruding the pores of her soft skin
As she picks flowers from the ground
Smiling, exonerating utter happiness
There she is
Author notes
Semi-Quickie contest (credit: meadows_of_heaven_by_WCS_Wildcat)
Click on the contest to see the pic. All of this just came to my mind as I looked at the picture. I hope you all enjoy -- in 52 words -- and let me know how you interpretted it. A stunning beauty in the prairie. Comments welcome and good luck to the other contestants!
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie... Picture prompt.. by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 12, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was really good..
I really like the emotion that you
rbought into this write.. the imagery
was really vivid and detailed as well..
You did a wonderful job.. thank you very much
for sharing. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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beautiful...really good description in this one, i can picture it vividly
i wanna be her lol -
That very last line felt tacked on, but that second stanza was beautiful. "Protruding the pores" is well-phrased, kind of strange imagery, but that's my favourite kind.
Good job with this, and good luck in your contest!
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awwww i love the begging and ending repition, its a beautiful poem, wonderfully written
good luck and take care
stephanie
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wow... your words a so beautiful and create such a pretty image in the readers mind.
good luck in the contest.
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