Tonight is no different
from the others.
I lay in bed by myself,
Crying uncontrollably.
I try forget about you,
Try let your memory run free.
But not everything goes as we want it to.
We were lovers,
Best friends.
Set to be together forever.
Fate had other plans.
You promised me the world,
I promised you my heart.
We promised each other happiness.
How could you be taken away from me?
You were so young,
We had our future set together.
But here I am,
Once again.
Lonely and confused.
Endless nights of tears
and nightmares
are on the rise.
I miss you so much,
Please come back to me
xx
Author notes
Georgia, you're my hero
PoisonousBeauty
A contest entry
- Surprise me :P by Georgia La Mariposa.
500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love comments =)
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A gret poem of a lost love that makes you only want to cry. But I like the last two lines expressing hope that he comes back..I dont know if I could write one better but did write one you might like of the same theme..Its called a forgotten dream....
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This was so sad. I think it is very well written and the pain just screams from the screen/page. You did a great job conveying your pain. I hope this is not personal and if it is
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Thank you :-)
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i feel the pain depicted in the poem...sad
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I loved this so passionate and painful
Loved it, you're trying to get all my [points lmao 
Well you're close to my heart xxx
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