Desiring to write

Sitting sadly, typing gladly,

Into a world of digital muse.

Concealing my loneliness,

here I just do my best,

free verse or rhyming to rules.

Life so dreary, mind weary,

fulfilling this lovers demands.

To her I shall cleave so tight,

caressing throughout the night,

‘till fulfilled she rests in my arms.

Author notes

My affair with AP seems as powerful as when it started.....

Affairs of the Mind. by toomysterious. 300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 3 entries
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Abe Chaos
September 27, 2008

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very very mezmirizing, it put a picture in my head, it also flowed quite well, i really enjoyed reading this imaginative piece, nice work
SilverWolf
September 2, 2008

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wow very very vivid! the backgroud helped add "feeling" this poem and helped it out alot!

The font also really helped!

I dont quite understand what you mean bout the affair with Allpoetry.. But it was still good nehow.

Great poem!

Keep writing and never give up!

Sincerely,
SilverWolf
Topnotchsy
August 20, 2008

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Well written piece full of vivid imagery. Like the font and background you chose to help add to the feel of the piece. Nice rhythm and rhyming as well.
written-in-ink
August 14, 2008
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hahah

so true
man this is me...

i loved it
amazing!!!
zochit2me
July 31, 2008

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Nice flow and exceptional delivery of this poem.
My affair with AP is as strong now as it was 21/2 years ago. It is like a drug...
Poets beware!

☼Becky☼
toomysterious
July 9, 2008
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Enjoyed this write and the approach you took, very close to what I had in mind.
Leaving Today
July 7, 2008
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wow..exceptional