Oceans, decrease chances,
sharing physical moments.
However,
our love, discovers the way
with powers that part
those seas.
Author notes
Written bout me and my ap hubby who is literally as far away from me as he could possibly be..in Scotland lol...but honestly most times..I truly feel like we could be sitting next to one another talking instead of on different sides of the world
so thats what I wrote about in my 18 word limit
and well im putting this in cause I have too apparently lol
In other notes this may shock her lmao put( I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin) if its not there you will be removed no if and are buts about it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Just 18 Words To Make Me Shock by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended July 12, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hello, again ... and congratulations on the silver win ... it was definately well deserved!
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Thank you im very happy to get silver
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its to beautiful I love it oh yes! this the whole set up its a sucker in peace I promise it is and i love backgrounds so two loves in one you are fabolous
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I had the background only a short while before the write..i saw it an thought...perfect..it has the ocean between the heart
i was praying it looked good, glad it did..and that the whole packaged worked
Thanks for the silver
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How very beautiful...
So very well done Cinds!
Simon
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How beautifully put sis!! It's true that oceans cannot really separate hearts...
Love this!
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Thanks SiS
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Beautifully put and so powerfully expressed. Your AP hubby is just up the road from me
Good luck in the contest hunni
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aww thats cute hehehe...When I visit him..I will come visit you too for sure hehehe...just dont ask when it will actually happen
hehe
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Your on, give me enough of a heads up to banish the kids and *party time!*
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I do like this very much. You expressed well, the feelings of having one so far away. Juls
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Thank you
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Wonderful words...know the feeling so well
Good luck
~sugar~
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What a beautiful way to share your sentiments... very nice... (shocking LOL)... but well done!
Ken
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Shocking..why shocking?
but thanks my friend
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Just teasing you dear... Here you are a committed lady expressing such openess for another man...
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lol...um well im not trying to express an inappropriate love for another....more so friendship..he is my best friend
and well my partner, real partner saw this, he knows of our relationship what it does..and does not entail..so there arent any issues.. I would never cross a line with my ap hubby against my real partner...but that doesn't mean I dont love him with all my heart either for being the best friend, a friend could be etc
if that all makes sense lol
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awwww, this is so sweet and serne, wonderful write sissy and good luck
take care
stephanie
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Thanx Sissy
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welcies
im super high on the chocolate candies ^_^
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this is a beautiful write and you have such strong wording that shows how you feel about people. I love you sissy
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Wow, I bow down beore your consumate skills - you make my humble attempt seem small in comparison! I'm a long way away, but so close,
Wifey
J
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hehe I have become even more skillful in ur absence
heheheeh
Lov U hubby..and loved writing this for you
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Love you too , Wifey , and thank you for your words and feelings.
J
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I love how it fit perfectly in the photo of the heart made by the hands .. how lovely! Very beautiful and romantic! Good luck in the contest!
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Awww. sisssy this was really sweet.. you did such a wonderful job?! I really loved it.. And I'm sure that he will too best of luck sissy!
Angel
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he was online when I wrote it..it's a reply to his, thats in the contest hehehe..and now he's gone offline 
...hope he comes back soon heheheh
Thanks SiSsy
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aww sissy.. I'm sure he'll be back soon! I read his for you and it was so sweet..
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I hope so, he's only just at work etc, so im sure its jus he got busy etc
hehe , he doesnt say its for me...but I know..or well if its not ..shove it..im saying it is heheh
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