~ My Fix ~

Author notes

I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin

A contest entry

• Just 18 Words To Make Me Shock by theredcatjazzoflove. 700 points, ended July 12, 2008, 21 entries
  Honorable mention
  • next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Comments

• By me, right now

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  daviscth
  August 1, 2008
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  You always put so much imagery into your work and this is wonderfully created. Congrats on the HM.

  
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    onesugar
    August 1, 2008
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    Thank you for reading and commenting
    
    Truly appreciated
    
    ~sugar~
• tarheel7496
  July 26, 2008
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  Good

  I like the short and simple ones. I need to work on some short ones like this. Good job.
• • onesugar
    July 26, 2008
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    Thank you for reading and commenting
    
    Valued and appreciated
    
    ~sugar~
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  kennethlaney
  July 14, 2008
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  Very nice

  This was very good Sugar. "BOO". Hope you have been well.

  
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    onesugar
    July 14, 2008
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    Hi "BOO" I've been good and you?
    
    Appreciate and value you reading and commenting.
    
    ~sugar~
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  theredcatjazzoflove
  July 12, 2008
  
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  wow i loved this you nailed this perfectly well i simply loved this you did awesome good luck in the contest
• • onesugar
    July 12, 2008
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    Always a pleasure to have you read
    
    Valued and appreciated
    
    ~sugar~
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  Rose-Quartz
  July 10, 2008
  
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  Beautiful and So Sad

  This poem is really beautiful and so sad. I think that it is the best short poem that I have ever read. It says so much in your words and leaves an imprint on the readers heart. I loved this so much, thankyou for writing this and sharing it with me. I wish you all Good Luck in the contest. With all my very best wishes from Rose xx for you x

  
• • onesugar
    July 10, 2008
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    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. truly appreciated.
    ~sugar~
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  Reptile Lady
  July 7, 2008
  
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  Oh wow hunni
  I love this 18 word poem says so much in such few words.
  Wish you all the best in the contest
  Julie
  
  
• • onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    Thank yu for reading Julie
    valued and appreciated
    ~sugar~
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  Dark Otter
  July 7, 2008
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  Addicted to love!

  Shoot me up with the cure, doc. I can't take the pain anymore.

  
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    onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    Tell me about it
    
    I appreciate you reading as always sweetie...my cure is out of reach
    
    Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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  Ms Sexy
  July 7, 2008
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  Awwww beautiful write.

  
• midnightblue1272
  July 7, 2008
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  Nice.

  Nice one, sis. Very romantic & sensual.

  
• • onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    Thanks Ms Sexy
    appreciate you stopping by
    ~sugar~
  • onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    Thanks bro
    glad you enjoyed. valued and appreciated
    ~sugar~
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  luna-midnight
  July 7, 2008
  
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  great 18words there
  wonderful write and good luck in the contest
  hope all is well
  stephanie

  
• • onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    Thanks Stephanie nice to see you
    All is well thank you
    ~sugar~
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  AddictiveTRUTH
  July 7, 2008
  
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  Lovely

  absolutely lovely creation you've penned here sis.
  Wishing you always the best
  Great job
  
  -piff

  
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    onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    He will always be out of reach, but he still makes my heart
    
    Appreciate you reading as always
    ~sugarcookie~
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  Wayne Leon Learmond
  July 7, 2008
  
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  Stunning work here. And I love the border too. Wonderful poem. Say's so much too. Good luck in the contest Sugar.
  
  Darkest
  Love
  Wayne Leon
  x

  
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    onesugar
    July 7, 2008
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    Thanks hon for reading and commenting
    always appreciate you.
    Darkest Love Always
    ~sugar~ x