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Make Me Yours!

 

 

 

 

 

Tell me what

 

you want me to be

 

tie me to the bedposts

 

make me surrender to you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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18 Words To Shock YOU!
"I love my Hindu Queen Riftkin"

A contest entry

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 7, 2008
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    hawt lo


  • kennethlaney
    July 14, 2008
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    Very good

    This was very good and appropiate for the picture my friend. "BOO"


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssss! oh i love this poem it is boldfully seductive and fierce I may add oh my i love it good luck


  • jcat gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Well I almost fell off my chair when the picture popped up!! You should post a warning!! The sensual content was explosive!!! And the tongue in cheek humor was awesome!!! This just ROCKED in its entirety!! love it and well done and best wishes


  • Valley Girl silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Frigging right J! lol!
    This is defintely a different
    type of writting style for you!
    Your imagery is fantastic with this!
    I hope that you do well in the contest,
    You sure have shocked me lol!
    Best of luck! ♥


  • Arizona Sunset
    July 7, 2008
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    WOW HOT HOT HOT AND A SHOCK! LOL But in a good way


  • Harlequin Bunny
    July 7, 2008

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    Psssst!
    (Don't forget to put : "I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin" .. it's mandatory in the rules!)

    Very sexy .. everyone needs to be tied up once in a while!

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