Distant
In age and miles,
Her heart already given
To another
Still,
My love is
Pure
Honest
True
Author notes
I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin
Written for my sweet AP Wifey , CinfullyDelicious, my wonderful Cindy
J
A contest entry
- Just 18 Words To Make Me Shock by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended July 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice i love it you really love this person nice work keep it up...
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i simply love this and the fact that it is a dedication lets me know this is a very nice special poem good luck in the contest
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This was really beautiful.. You did such a wonderful job.. there was love in this write.. yet there was pain as well.. To love someone who has given their heart to another hurts badly, yet it seems like you cannot help but still love them.. I really loved this and can relate to it as well.. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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Thanks Angel
I think Cin knows exactly how I feel about her, and I know what she feels for me. That's enough for my soul.
J
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awwwww ive been in this situation b4...good job expressing in only 18 words.
xoxo-christina
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Thanks Christina
It's easy when you actually feel it to put it straight onto paper - and I'm a man of few words anyway!
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ur welcome. and yea it is and lol
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!
divine, lovely, lovely. Any girl would be so elated to have this written about her
~all the best in the contest!!!
Sailor Ptolema
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Thanks Sailor
I reckon that I know how lucky I am to have my Cin, and how much I appreciate her. This is just a little token of my affection.
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'Twas divine
I loved it.
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Man if this isn't about me..then who else you got on the side
Sweet words Hubby..you say it in such a touching heartfelt manner within your 18 words
I think me needs to enter and see if I can do justice in a reply
WIFEY
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My darling Wifey , who else could it possibly be about?
And your reply is wonderful indeed.
I thought you'd like it!
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it's super cute, just read it
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