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Forever Dawn

These affairs of the mind
Are colossal; decadent; undefined
The depths of a soul
Within endless tapered confines

That recede like the surf raping the sand...
Fully anew
Within the crepuscular rays of the morning light
I search for you...
My breath, my life, my reconciled
Mind...Mind me here, within the truth of the night.

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  • toomysterious
    July 9, 2008
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    Complexities in thought do abound here. Thanks for entering.


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    This is really good. I think it would have more impact if structured differently, but all and all, intriguing...

    Love,Lane