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Ode to Alcohol

i drink to feel good
i drink to feel bad
i drink to excess
wow the time i have had
the whiskey runs
through my veins
into my blood
into my brain
to think that i have no problem
is the base of all my problems
as it is, it is
i haven't reached a bottom
but heaven help me when i do

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I know it sucks...it's not my usual style, but I had to let it out

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 7

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    no drinking too much alcohol. but thisis a powerful write and it does express inner feelings and stuff. wonderfully done