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Laying in bed next to him
Watching his peaceful innocence
As the bright morning sun hits his face

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I Love My Hindu Queen Riftkin

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    i loved this very sensual very poetic romantic
    with the great smelling scents of love i simply loved it you did a great job


  • XNevermindX
    July 7, 2008

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    I agree with poisonousbeauty, that is cute, amazingly cute and sweet! I loverz it....whats new! Lol =]


  • CharcoalScreams
    July 7, 2008
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    0o0o0 cute! Good luck, love you smexii xXx

  • hardeepb
    July 7, 2008

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    Very sweet

    Sometimes I wish I could wake up next to her, watching her peaceful in the most warm of ways; a place where she belongs. I love the sweetness and love imbedded in this poem; I feel her gentle touch just reading this piece. Great work! 9/10!

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