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cold and quiet

I'm cold and I'm quiet,

I'm cut to the bone.

This heart's pumping,

but it's made out of stone.

I'm waiting for God knows what,

as I watch that sun rise.

I'm begging the air for feelings,

trying to wet my eyes.

How do you feel again,

when you've fought it so long?

Your life doesn't change with seasons,

or with the words of a song.

I suppose I feel nothing.

Isn't that something?

not really...

I'm cold and I'm quiet.

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It's about apathy...

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  • lechap
    July 8, 2008

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    I can feel ya on this one completely man. I too have dry eyes and numb hands. cold calm and sane(?). Great flow, I liked the double spaces I have not seen that used effectively before.