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Affairs Of The Mind

Images that transcend thought
wishes that all come to naught
weary from the wars I've fought
in days gone by.

Searching through a tired mind
looking hard only to find
memories on a loop re-wind
to make me cry.

brain on fire I've done my best
finiished now I've acquiesced

recollections all compressed

The task complete.

 

Just one affair to give me peace

thoughts inside that will not cease

expanding, whirling they increase 

 

 

I hit delete. 

 

 

 

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 20
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    Nice write. Congrats on the well deserved gold trophy on this piece!! Loved the rhyming.


  • scenesanath
    August 8
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    this is simply super
  • bexterbum
    July 11
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    i love this
  • Ah, if only it were so easy, just hit delete. Wonderful flow here and great thoughts.

  • this is amazing huun, good luck in the contest,
    i really do love this, its so beautiful,
    all my love,,
    kitty xxx
  • OMG, THIS IS AWESOME!!"

  • lol geez is that all one has to do is hit delete? lol love it! best to you in the contest...blessings always~ Trisha


    • Piccola gold member
      July 7
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      lol ... this is where the muse went. Kind of like my mind at the moment. I try to stop thinking but just can't seem to. I search inside for some thought or memory that will bring peace but it doesn't come. Just more confusion and pain. I guess holding my head between my hands and screaming, "Stop!" is like delete. LOL
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