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Small People Create Big Problems






Trusting,
a child awaits.
Formed in the
union of "love",
it grows in ignorance.

Screaming,
the skin burned
beyond belief,
it grieves in horror.

Dying,
it lands in the arms
of an angel,
sent to carry it
home.

Forgiving,
it finds solace
in the taste of eternity.




©2008
7-6-08



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Written for the contest: Contest grotesque paintings from a grotesque mind by louder than bombs
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2410975

Picture: http://bp3.blogger.com/_mk-LiBhV7-M/R-1-HdXDk_I/AAAAAAAAADE/NsPTpnxPyok/s1600-h/homunculus.jpg ©Fred Einaudi

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