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chewing




petals stick in your hair
while chewing on possibilities’ lip





Author notes

pink => the prompt

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    July 11
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    Wonderful

    Ahhh, short, but very creative. Congrats on the gold


  • phantasyintrigue-x silver member
    July 7

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    Man, you always know JUST which words to say for the Gold cup (well-deserved BTW )...

    This is amusing, visually strong, and hilariously brilliant. The whole thing feels sticky, but in the least yucky way...great write (:


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    July 7

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    Wow! What a truly creative take on the prompt. Congratulations on the well deserved gold
    Gaylene


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    July 7
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    Fabulous!!!... x

  • crimsondew silver member
    July 6
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    petals stick in your hair
    So unique...love this write, excellent imagery,,All the very best!


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    July 6
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    Damn...This is excellent!

    Well done and good luck!
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