Death to part do unto lust,
and shaking fingers like rhyme,
tangles with flexing bust,
like damp braids of string entwined.
hot pink static and boiling moan
create a fog like heaven.
the smell of love fills our home,
masked by red door and M7.
from two minds leap a single thought,
an embrace that quench your breath.
lets lay like this forever more,
lets never again get dressed.
Author notes
All critics welcome...
A contest entry
- Make my heart flutter...make me delirious with passion! by azlyn.
499 points, ended July 26, 16 entries
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Comments
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Usually I am not that fond of short verses...here is the grand exception! This is powerful! I did get a very emotional response from the words here! Very nice...best of luck!
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this was
and is amazing.....you wrote this beautifuly....



