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Never again get dressed...

Death to part do unto lust,
and shaking fingers like rhyme,
tangles with flexing bust,
like damp braids of string entwined.

hot pink static and boiling moan
create a fog like heaven.
the smell of love fills our home,
masked by red door and M7.

from two minds leap a single thought,
an embrace that quench your breath.
lets lay like this forever more,
lets never again get dressed.

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  • azlyn gold member
    July 7

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    Usually I am not that fond of short verses...here is the grand exception! This is powerful! I did get a very emotional response from the words here! Very nice...best of luck!

  • this was

    and is amazing.....you wrote this beautifuly....