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play something andante




play something andante and the violin
speaks to the soul wrapped in humming,
enticing forgotten dreams

memory sighs, listening to the moon’s
expressions of disappointment -

a change of course serenade
swirls in the air




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Prompted =>
"the girl i love plays the violin, and she knows that i love the beauty hidden to her within her soul. regrettably she floats away like dust drifting in the wind. not a word is spoken, time creates the gap, days pass and soon all love is over ripened. the girl i loved still plays the violin. alone."
-Anonymous, from website: grouphug.us

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  • Lj-
    July 21

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    There's a softness to these words.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck.