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Dragged and Pulled

Untouched again,

nippy shivers bury
would-be varicose veins
behind uninterested walls
of seclusion's ardor.

Stone pulsates blindly,
follicles feed on petals
pretentiously parallel to
draped color's infection,
soul's destination bled.

Author notes

30 words, Option A

Pulled from a disastrous environment, dragged into a worse scenario.

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  • Naridill gold member
    July 9
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    Beautiful. I like that disastrous you.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 8

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    Wow.. strong words! A feeling of 'out of the frying pan into the fire'... absolutely awesome write my sweet king! Congrats on the Gold!!



  • PerfectImperfection
    July 7
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    I knew 'twas a goldie all da time

  • CinfullyDelicious
    July 7

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    wow..I am in love with this..so strong..just bam slap me in the fce storng emotion through such great wording

    Awesomeness!!
    Thank you and good luck


    Cind


  • SuicidalLover gold member
    July 7

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    Ooo....my I see a silver here! I mean this is a great take on meaning for picture A. You've done a fantasic job. *clap* Wonderful. I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 7
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    Great job here and so dark and deep. Love, C


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 7

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    This was really good.. I have no words to say really.. You did a wonderful job.. I wish you the best of luck..

    Angel

  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    July 7

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    Damn....
    I really can not find the words to described how well this is written....

    Well done and good luck, although you may not need it...

  • PerfectImperfection
    July 6

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    ooooooh!!! Wow, if walls could speak - this is much of what they would have to say lol. Honestly - such a well rounded and intense tale derived from the image. Well penned!!!

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