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Road to Ravenna

 

 

The old road to Ravenna
littered with broken Fiats
once glittered with tears of God

Children gather at the feet
of the Archbishop who tells them
to abjure life and welcome death
teeth clattering like dry bones

Beneath the bed-sheet
boar bristles score his skin
His face gives nothing away

he could be selling steak knives


Kids, as kids do, tire fast
and cry for their mothers but
the malls are open late tonight
even in Ravenna

The Archbishop ascends
steady as any moon
He  fingers the neon afterglow
beyond the Traventine hills
Is it salvation or damnation?


Either, he devoutly prays, will do

 

 

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    The last seat of the Western Emperors of Rome. The place where the stony face of Justinian stares down from the wall of the Chiesa di San Vitale.

    What is going on in this poem? Something rumbles, a sub-current of something portentous, words below the range of human hearing, unease. I really love this poem.


  • B2oH
    July 15, 2008
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    This is an interesting look at spirituality...or rather, the transformation of the ectasy...rapture from pain or pleasure..either will do.

    Hair shirts and modern life....a juxtaposition of history with the unchanging humanity beneath it all.

    A most intriguing portrait.


  • malmadre gold member
    July 13, 2008
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    He fingers the neon afterglow
    beyond the Traventine hills
    Is it salvation or damnation?
    It's the damnation of a new walmart where he buys his steak knives in some blue light special or is that K mart. That expressionless face is summed up by your last line.


  • Amera gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    I think this is a pretty dark outlook on life. Most likely because it's true. You did an amazing job of putting it into art form. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Cup-a-Joe silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    David,
    I think I might have spent a night or two there. Is it salvation or damnation?-I don't know.
    Good to read this tonight.
    Joe

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