He begged to no avail
she coldly remained impassive
to all advances he attempted.
Far removed from permissiveness
unaffected by handsome features
and his obvious desire...
she remained completely
un-in-penetrate-able.
Author notes
30-50 words: "A rose fell misguided by thorns of a noose ... in-vase-ive murder."
by: (PerfectImperfection & solo wisp)
A contest entry
- !!!!Quickie!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
650 points, ended July 7, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is tantalizing! A powerful piece!
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taiinfinite
oh im hanging 4 the next chapter i want to no why, haha great write
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Wow! Pretty powerful for the short word count. I see why you won a trophy. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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well done a wonder in true brevity of profound unspoken messages that get lost in hte shuffle of advancements well done and many blessings always xxx
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Such an incredible struggle love can be when communication is barren. That's what I feel from this poem.
Best of Luck in the Contest!
Steve - solo wisp
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A thought provoking piece to go along with the chosen quote. Intriguing detail and effect. Thanks for your entry!
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