Rain quivers silent
on satin skin
wrapped close
to satin skin
Fingers seeking ribbing
and fragile spines
marking heated pathways
for soft lips
and eager tongues
Kiss and tender touch concealed
under tinted clouds
and languid summer heat
where hearts beat
and hips meet
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Make my heart flutter...make me delirious with passion! by azlyn.
499 points, ended July 26, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Yeah, life is good.
Comments
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Wow!
Now thats a reason to be doing amazing.
Such a sophisticated picture of class and beauty.
Your cosmopolitan reflections brought on an air of magical sensuality.
Summer rains with sweet sounds of ecstasy were captured in this truly erotic and romantic piece.
But it was fully charged... while still keeping the wonder of feminin innocents.
A soft sensuous piece of art lassie.
With the power of love,
anything is possible.
LOWELL.
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Thank you.
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"Kiss and tender touch concealed
under tinted clouds
and languid summer heat
where hearts beat
and hips meet"
Full of passion and emotion charged! Sweet and sultry words my friend. Good luck inthe ontest!
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Such sweet words! The last two lines amaze me! Very nice...best of luck!!!
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