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Better Days Ahead

sometimes life's a bummer
it gives us troubles too
it's just because when days are great
we want to know they're true

oft stretches seem so long
no better in between
that's when it seems too tough to bear
nothing could be foreseen

keep the faith, hope is strong
without it we are done
better days will be coming soon
and then you will have won

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Poem for tawk - keep the faith; think positive

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. Better days always come after the bad ones. I definitely agree! Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • tawk gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Thanks my dear friend for the beautiful and uplifting poem. That is what keeps me going on is hope and faith that one day I will be better. Thanks for caring it means the world too me. Good luck in the contest with this very touching poem bless you, Theresa


  • Nature Song silver member
    July 7, 2008

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    Better days are sure to come. From within if we truely believe! Great penning my friend! ~Sie


  • a.changed-soul.
    July 7, 2008

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    Wonderful tribute to Theresa I know she will love it! Thanks for entering,
    best of luck in the contest.

  • celadia
    July 7, 2008

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    Yay!!!! Great. love it, it's so true, some days can be a bum, for me every day, but you're right, better days are coming. I hope.


  • Vigorous
    July 7, 2008

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    Very Positive and True

    Always remember the darkest hour is just before dawn and rainbows follow the storm.

    http://www.homewithgod.com/Cards/gowiththeflow.shtml

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