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Adrenaline

Heartbeat is quickened,
Life flashes before your eyes,
Adrenaline high.

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  • azure85 gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Heartbeat is quickened,
    Life flashes before your eyes,
    Adrenaline high.

    Ah, this is so true.

    Haiku are usually written as a series of images/sensations that you observe. What happens to bring the increase in adrenaline, that you could write as an image?

    You may revise as many times as you want to or not before the close of the contest. Thank you so much.