say those things to me,
tracing outlines of hearts
against my skin. I want to hear
the blink of your day
in simple kisses and inflective sounds,
voice husky finding me waiting for you
it is the decadence of your arms
I wait for each night, simply
pour myself in, for you to taste;
no complaints and a whisper
to the steely stars that peep,
thanking heaven for your girl
skin becomes electric as sky
deepens its hold, yet sleep
is forbidden until the fruit
we eat has ended
beaten path of home
is where my head lays,
silent on your chest
and fingertips say
more than words at play
the pillow of my dreams
sleeps safe while I close
my eyes and smile
In a list
A contest entry
- Make my heart flutter...make me delirious with passion! by azlyn.
499 points, ended July 26, 16 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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When the wind wrapped itself around you and suddenly winter was a warm as a bright fresh day in spring, when you caught the musky scent that raised goose bumps on the race of nerves called your spine -- fingers under the chin and a kiss brushing your cheek. Leaves you with your eyes closed and you want to hug ... but, you know no one is there.
It is that time when dreams escape the sleep and your fingertips catch the sparks of and ancient energy and it races to the spine and holds your heart. I can hear the sigh as the breeze suddenly picks up and moves through the leaves in the tree. It is that time again.
Love knows no season and cares little for rules beyond the knowledge that it truly rules.
Love Tom B.
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This gives that expression (from the AT&T ad) let your fingers do the walking a whole new meaning. I infer from the poem that you already know which buttons to push to get what you want. So pen on dear friend, pen on. But don't make those fingers too tired you may have miles to go before you sleep..lol. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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You know this is great! My dear I always enjoy peeking at your verses. Very romatic great imagery!
best wishes
~Lisa~
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lol Peek away Lisa, I don't mind a bit
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*sigh* so beautiful...All the best in the contest dear poet.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Phenominal.........
The expression of thoughts in similar veins carry easily through what flows from within a dream.
you bring to life all that lies hidden in the prayers of many to share, and you do it with style.
Just pure brilliance.
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eh the gal's in love what can I tell ya
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like the way you write and the way you smile.
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Flutter...flutter!!! This is so pretty and so warm and loving!!! Thank you so much for the entry and very best of luck!
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Thanks sigh...can't help it when you feel this way about someone lol
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