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River Flows (haiku)

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eons of strata
surround timeless river
years carried away

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  • tomisb silver member
    July 7, 2008
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    The last line turns it all into a song.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Kelli Marie
    July 7, 2008

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    A very nicely crafted haiku. Good word choices. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli


  • crimsondew
    July 6, 2008
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    This is profound! well written dear..All the best in the contest!


  • movedon
    July 6, 2008
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    beautiful. short and wonderful! You take care

    love
    mylee