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frightened


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envy and jealousy
won’t break me;
but your words will.
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prompt: green

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  • sighingflosser.
    October 26
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    i don't really ilke the spacing. it seems too set up.
    but other than that, this is great.


  • letters to no one
    January 9

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    Powerfullllllllllllllllllllllll

    It's mad difficult to comment on short poems

    Especially when they are so very very close to the idea of perfection

    I would say it was perfect, but you know my views on "perfection" i.e. that it doesn't exist

    Shelly
    xxx


  • aanika
    July 11, 2008

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    awww
    i like the connection to green
    I WONT LET ANYONE BREAK YOU!
    love youuu.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    Indeed they shall ~ truly meaningful... x