my love denied
time to forget
his face
so a cold one
shall do the trick
I can't count after fore
oops
well
that enough
dancing till i can't breath
so then I'll just jump
no need to think
can't even remember my own name
thought of him creep up
hes with her
I'm with the spins
can't walk straight
still remember his face
shall have another shot
oh
whats that
jello shot
that will do
the ceilings spinning left
so I'll spin my body right.
your pretty cute
glow sticks
two packs of smokes gone
wares my purse
i hate this song
why did you have to show up
frig off
hold up
sorry
thought you were someone else
can barely walk
could you help me to the washroom
my best-friend, toilet
what to tell people
um
exploding diarrhea
laughing historically
stomach gurgles
I'm going to be sick
every-things white
control system numb
can't see straight
dehydrated
make up smudged
splash of water
comes a time in life
tap water is perferd
cold shivers
lay on the cold floor
sing my self to sleep
dream of the one i can't have
till i wake up in the morning
still shit faced
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Option #4: Lyrics. Fun, moving, dark, depressing, I don't care. Go for it.
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hahahahah ohmygawd what an interesting poem ! I love it! It's so unique and I loved how it was written. You seriously just made me laugh out loud. I LOVED this. My favorite line[s] had to beee:
"my best-friend, toilet
what to tell people
um
exploding diarrhea"
hahaha. AMAZING. Thanks for sharing & entering! I swear, this just made my day
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