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Daisy Under The Oak


Would you look
at that?

There's a daisy
growing under
that old oak-

I wonder if it
is a sign from you?

Did you find a way
to send it to me?
To thank me for
visiting you?

Oh, I don't know-
but it sure looks
good here-

I think I'll leave it
here for you to enjoy.

That way there is
a reminder here,
of the times
we have shared.

Each petal-
linked in the center,
connects me to you,

in our hearts-
as fast friends
we have become.

I love you
my friend,

Until next time...



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  • Swtpoetryman
    July 14, 2008

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    Another fine piece for your OLD OAK JOURNAL!

    Each petal-
    linked in the center,
    connects me to you,

    Very fine lines filled with emotion, love, and peace, my friend! Yet, another fine addition to your OLD OAK JOUNAL! You seem to have found a wonderful spirit to talk to - who is also speaking through you! Perhaps, this person was and still is a poet, too!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • penman gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    excellent

    Oh my such a beautiful creation. A joy to read. Thank you for sharing


  • Walking shadow
    July 8, 2008

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    A connection

    A connection that binds us all together, even when we pass on to the spirit world. The spirits may not be able to communicate with us directly all the time but they do find ways to get our attention.


  • Desire gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Gosh!!

    Now interesting this piece is for I kept seeing a female leaned up against a tree writing in a diary-journal-
    Another Precious piece penned and felt as if there
    Love this installment also!!
    Excellent~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~