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Rage

Reckless Rampage
Aggressive Anger
Garrote Genius
Evoking Execution

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I CAN'T SLEEP!!!  

No Idea where this came from...
Written January 5th, 2004

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  • surferxchik
    January 15, 2005
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    This was sooo good!! Short but sweet. The background really added to the poem...I enjoyed reading it, and you did an awesome job writing it


  • Desire gold member
    January 6, 2004
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    This sounds like me today~ ...Awesome piece as always~Love it...YOU just keep on writing these acrostics ~Big hugs and much love~Desire


  • January 5, 2004
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    No sleep does weird things to people. Great way of saying how rage is..what it is. Very cute idea...not so cute of a topic. Maybe I should sleep less or be bored more. Those two combined could get me some great works eh? Oh..and the way each word in each line starts with the same letter....awesome. Great thinking!!!

    --Keita


  • glazecovered
    January 5, 2004
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    Evoking Execution....
    I love this.
    Hope you get to sleep soon.
    ~Anastasia


  • In-fin-ite
    January 5, 2004
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    hmmm...and I thought I was the angry one... I loved the short sweetness of it. I loved letter poetry the double letter part of it really blows me away. Sorry that you could not sleep. (Did you try the game cube it helps me sometimes) Okay I will stop rambling.

    Again it was aanother lovely piece. I can't wait until the next...

    ~JayLynn


  • Samplette gold member
    January 5, 2004
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    Rage is sprouted for many reasons.....this is a great acrotic.
    Sam

  • Hugh Jorgan
    January 5, 2004
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    the lack of sleep always brigs out the deepest of rage oh maybe so... lack of sleep is not always a bad thing (unless your driving of course hehe) pen on!!!

  • Jhirrad
    January 5, 2004
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    Hmmmm....That's interesting. I mean, anger coming out pretty strong in this piece. But reading the note that you can't sleep when you wrote this, I think that I can sort of understand where you were coming from, in that it's like all these raw emotions that build up and that in one moment feel as though they are boiling to the surface. I think that sleep-deprivation, or deprivation of anything really, can do that to you. Nice work.

  • John J. Ruppert
    January 5, 2004
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    This was cool.


  • Gypsy
    January 5, 2004
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    I feel like this right about now ....have you been reading my mind ? lol....seriously though inside so few words its straight and to the point with meaning ..I like ...well done


  • April Renee
    January 5, 2004
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    authors comment..lol..absolutely can relate...

    for the poem
    i like the style
    and it packed a punch
    well done

    ~*~Blu~*~

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