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Abuzz



big black bear
in honey tree
life's abuzz










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haiku 3-4-3

A contest entry

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  • jjbreunig3
    July 19

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    A cute haiku...

    A cute haiku; with plenty of leftover syllables - lol; really enjoyed the double meaning within the last line nicely done. --Joe


  • Jillybean128
    July 19

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    Brings a smile to my face Nicely done with this one. I like your word choice. Good luck in the contest.

    ~Jillybean128

  • azure85 gold member
    July 12

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    big black bear
    in honey tree
    life's abuzz

    I think this is cute, and fine as is. It is a good play on words in L3. Thank you so much.