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[ Haiku ] - Landscapes

       
    _canyons_

etched-  by ancient ice
      desert scars





My Haiku Poetry

Author notes

Inspiration to a picture
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2412/529.jpg?1215392373

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    July 14

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    Well Done! Got some fine contrast working in this poem. Congrats on the trophy.

    Dennis


  • Sailor Ptolema gold member
    July 8
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    I like this very much!!!!! It creates a clear picture in my mind. A superb 'ku


  • MoonsShadow gold member
    July 7
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    VERY clear

    desert scars are so true as life barely exists there, good luck in her contest
    Lin


  • grannyeri gold member
    July 6

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    Again, do like your new form for writing this haiku - really impressive anad descriptive the worwds yu have used here to describe this picture prompt.


  • Kelli Marie
    July 6

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    I'm not used to having a capital in the beginning of an haiku. Something I guess people want me to get used to. I love the "etched by ancient ice" and "desert scars" Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli

    • Malabu
      July 6
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      lol...neither am I haha...Ive fixed that I was on the phone when I entered it...
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