Essentials of quietude sometimes
need darkened moments alone.
Elements of flickering candles
enhancing the storms to roam.
Wandering across natures skies
rocky mountains, hills, dales.
Sunset evenings welcome sunrises
each morning without fail.
Wishing to be wrapped-up in YOU
dreaming of hopes becoming true.
Pondering over a glass of port
cursing grey skies to turn blue.
Sprinkles of my misty showers
blooming love's beautiful flowers.
Author notes
dwelling on a memory....
In a list
A contest entry
- Thoughts by Sue Cardwell.
1750 points, ended July 20, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Brilliant
The first stanza is my favourite. Rich with metaphor and tone. Well done, ennovy
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A wonderful look into the mind of her quiet desperation of a love desired but not yet realized
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Lost in the elements, a drift in a sea where feelings move the waters. Dreams are for the soul to feed and find seeds to create the tomorrows that should blossom. Desires pent burst into fire when released.
Beautifully done.
Love, Tom B.
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Thank you for your entry in my contest. A wonderful take on the prompt, your words bought the picture to life and we were privilege to her thoughts.
Good luck in the contest...Sue
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It is a beautiful dream full of emotion. Love, C
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