Noah is making a fuss
and all three dachshunds
want to join in
On the other side
there is cricket
of course
Mr Pizza is washing the concrete
and the loud builder
is being
loud
Mrs Hanrahan's daughter
calls
The Russians have car trouble
and the Poles are helping
while two girls talk Italian
loudly
Just a street
in Harrow
A contest entry
- Close Your Eyes by Dalaney.
1275 points, ended July 25, 17 entries
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Comments
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Arra sounds like 'eaven!
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Hmm. welp I think its time to call it a night.
Too much fun tonight. LMAO and too think I dusted off a old desk top and straining eyes for oddness.
Ahh well. This indeed will place.
As any fine entry should.
Love
Passions
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Sound like a summer's day with everyone out and about but I know it rained cos I watched Wimbledon all bloody night!!!!
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