This is me,
Here I am,
I’m real and that’s all you,
Need to, understand.
I’m standing proud,
For all to see,
I’m happy and that’s,
The way I, want it to be.
This is me,
I’m all I am,
I want to share with all,
How my happiness began.
Every hardship,
Every fight,
I’ve fought my way through,
To make my wrongs right.
This is me,
Still fighting strong,
I’m here in this world,
Where I belong.
Hate me, love me,
I’ll let you decide,
I can only give,
What I can provide.
This is me,
What more can I say?
Accept me for me,
‘Cause I’m, here to stay.
*By Raven Tears* (Copyrightã 2008)
Author notes
I am the Almighty Enigma. Fear me. )
A contest entry
- who the hell do you think you are? by rainboots.
400 points, ended September 16, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give honest opinions, (exempting negativity!)
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Wonderful imagery. The tone fit the poem like a glove. Well done.
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Beautiful
this is a wicked piece standing your ground and putting yourself out as you are never looking to change to fit what society expects - i really like it reminds me of a piece i wrote sometime ago -thanks very much for sharing this one. -
wow
i love this, this style is quite unlike what im used to, the way it's written, but it's wonderful...keep up the good work -
Well
Well spoken my friend!! I really like this write! It says it all! Keep up the great work! :-)
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Interesting write. Very open and yet still closed, in a sense, almost like a one way mirror. An excellent entry.
Best of Luck,
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greata poem, but all the commas are very distracting. they are at the end of every line [[even when they aren't needed]] and some in the middle of the lines where they create an akward pause. i love the poem itself, its just those commas.
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wonderful write. filled with strong emotions, it paints a picture of one with confidence. thank you for sharing this. keep writing poet!!! God bless you always
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well done . . flows well . . says it all . . liked "Still fighting strong" and "Accept me for me" . .
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this is the whole point of one's existence...i really like it...
"This is me,
What more can I say?
Accept me for me,
‘Cause I’m, here to stay."
amazing image of majesty has shown in the last four lines...i really enjoyed it...all the best...
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i liked it a nice right lots of confidence in this write. you got to love that.
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Excellent
I love it. You stand tall and say Hi, this is me, no frills or window dressing. Well said and written.
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Lovely poem. I really enjoyed this. It truly was a beautiful poem. =) It kept me intrigued until the end. Keep on writing, until you can't no more!
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~Make Peace, Not War~
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BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!!!
One can only be themselves and give what is within themselves to give. If others do not like who they are and what they have to give that is up to them but do not stop them from being what they are.
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I really like this piece. It's so real, so you. Best of luck in the contest.
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