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Where Did You Go

Where are you grandma?
I'm here,
But where did you go?
I miss you.
I didn't want you to leave,
I miss you.
You helped me,
Where are you?
I don't like living,
Without you.
I can't stop crying,
Daddy doesn't notice.
Mommy doesn't either.
I cry,
And cry,
They don't hear me.
Only you did grandma.
I miss you,
I want you back.
I wish you didn't...
Die...

Author notes

To my grandma... she left me... and now I need her... here is my quoet that I made for it "Where Are You Grandma, When I Need You Most" which brought me to tears, so I wrote this poem.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 18

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    Oh honey I am so sorry

    I use to go and stay every summer with my grandmother and I know just what you mean when you say she always noticed when you felt bad or cried. I hope you understand she still notices honey for they may have passed but you can still talk to her she hears you and know she is forever about you . Some people dont realize that their spirite sees all and not to worry some day you will be back in her arms again .She will watch over you every day and night .I love you honey and knowing this about grandmas it makes me much happier and one day I will run back into my Grandmas arms for I know she is in heaven and she is safe there and loved .God if you will watch when you go outside God will let her place a flower for you to see or hear a song from a lovely bird maybe the most beautiful sunrise or sunsets for she will make you want to look about for she is within all you see.


  • black hearted rebel
    July 8

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    Awwwwwwwww this was really sweet I'm sure your grandmother misses you too...but cry all you want even though people say it doesnt work I beg to differ

  • taintedsunshine
    July 6
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    When I read this, i felt a knot forming in my throat,like i wanted to cry. I dont usually read poems like this...the kind of poems that dont have a certain kind of ryhme.. but Im glad I read urs. It played off my emotions and I think u did an all-around great job on it.Im sorry she left...*hugs*


    • xXDarkChildXx
      July 6
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      Thank you. I cried writting this haha It just hit me so hard. Glad you liked it though. *hugs*