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Fourth of July Under The Oak

It's the fourth of July now,
I thought I would sit here
with you , and watch the
fireworks.

We've only known
each other for
a short time,
I know-

But I thought
you might like
some company-

while watching
the fireworks,
over the lake-

It's nice sitting here,
a gentle night breeze,
off the lake,

talking with you,
and the brillant
colors shining on the lake.

I think I have
found the best
spot for this time
of year.

Happy Fourth
my friend...


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  • Swtpoetryman
    July 9, 2008

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    HAPPY TO SEE THAT YOU WATCHED THE FIREWORKS UNDER THE OAK!

    Another fine addition to you latest book, my dear friend - that could be off to the publishers SOON at the rate that you are going! Keep them coming, Baby! And I am sure that you nameless friend has been enjoying your visits as much as you have!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Walking shadow
    July 8, 2008

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    WOW

    I was at a very special spot myself. I was at historic civic stadium here in Eugene, Oregon watching a baseball game. I got the honor with many thousands of our baseball friends to come down to the field and watch the fireworks. This being the last year the Eugene Emeralds will play there, they are getting a new stadium. It will never be as good as that old civil stadium. The old wood bleechers, ahh I will miss it. The fireworks reminded me of our connection with father sky and all being on this planet. We are all related.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Lovely write here

    Sounds devine watching the fireworks over the lake while beneath an oak tree with a friend this is great


  • Desire gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oooooooooooooooh this is a Beauty of a piece and Love how You incorporated the Holiday~
    This is a Gem like the others

    Excellent!!
    You Busy Bee~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Mrs. Mautino
    July 6, 2008

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    I can't wait for a Christmas one or a holiday one Those are my favorite of these!
    Love, Little One


  • penman gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Such a great expression for the theme. Another terrific creation. Thank you for sharing.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Such calm and peacefulness in this. Makes me wish I was there. Well done Nettie!

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