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Down By The Park

Running hand in hand,
you ten, me twelve,
each loving the sun,
each other and our selves.
Hit the swings flying,
kicking for some air,
laughing, playing,
a world without a care.
And in twenty years?
Who knows who we'll be.
Right now i'm just content,
to have you here with me!

Author notes

a simple ditty about childhood sweethearts and inncocence.

A contest entry

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Comments

  • Good i liked this alot short but you made your point so very well done good job
  • Ah..the innnocency is the gem here revealing the beauty of this life....well done my friend....thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
  • This is very wonderful Good luck in the contest
    "And in twenty years?
    who knows who we'll be.
    Right now I'm just content,
    To have you here with me!"
    Favorite part!!!


    kipha