I have paced this room for to long.
All that changes, is the time passing by.
I'm trying to create memories I never had.
While I'm trying to whisper, goodbye.
Sometimes pieces,
Don't fit the way they should.
Sometimes people,
Don't care the way they are meant to.
Sometimes dreams,
Don't seem real unless your sleeping.
Sometimes you,
Have to let go of everything.
In order to do what you have to.
Now this window seems to be getting rusty.
How many times I used it to breathe.
Little did I know, it's all inside me.
Depended on so many things with no guarantee.
It's time for me to grow more in age.
Create memories that I know will last.
Appreciate my present, and mold my future.
While letting go of my past.
Sometimes pieces,
Are meant to be broken.
Sometimes people,
Are meant to be hidden from you.
Sometimes dreams,
Are meant to come from your heart.
Sometimes you,
Have to let go of everything.
In order to find that new start.
Author notes
a lot of people inspired me for this song/poem.
mostly, it was my mom :]]
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i really like this poem
its inspiring and just makes me think, u know? the last piece of ur poem is my favorite
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This was a sweet poem.
Well penned. Brilliant
write. You have an amzing
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it's really great to stumble across a work that is not only true to the writer, but to the reader as well. this poem is meaningful and beautiful.
kAsSiE
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I can completely relate to what you've penned brilliantly here.
It's amazing how inspirational people can be, and I think you really made the most of your experiences with these people, and written a lovely poem.
So many times in my life this poem would've helped me realise that I was holding onto something that wasn't there anymore.
Oh and I think it would be great to music
Chin up,
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This is very inspirational! My favorite line was "Sometimes you, have to let go of everything. In order to find that new start." This poem is just amazing. Im in awe...
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woah, this is very good....inspirational. I think it sends the perfect message.
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It's amazing.
As usual.
"Sometimes pieces are meant to be broken"
I love that.
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Wow. This was amazing! I enjoyed reading this so much. It had a lot of emotions to it.
"Sometime pieces,//Are meant to be broken" ~ I agree with that sometimes they are. And the ones that aren't meant to be broken are.
"Sometimes people,//are meant to be hidden from you." ~ Yea, they are because they are not.
"Sometimes you,// Have to let go of everything.//In order to find that new start"~ This is what some people have to see.
[Overall]: It was great and I can't wait to read the rest of your poems. And it's kool how you were inspired by your mom.
[Suggestions]: I was thinking that where you put "Appreciate my present, and mold my future.//While letting go of my past" ~ Maybe you chould put Appreciate my present, forget my past.// And beging to mold my future.-- But even if you don't put that it would be great!
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Wow charlee. Strongly written and very well done. I congratulate you on this AMAZING write. I love your word choice. Beautiful imagery as well. I love love LOVE it!!!!!!
Warmest,
Mylee
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